Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Reading as an Eighth Grader


okay so the book we are readng now is pretty confusing. By the end of the fith chapter it was okay but I personaly don't think that the author is a good writer. I mean I could do a better job in writing and belive me I have. The author took 2 paragraphs just to tell that she was clumsy and a few pages to tell why she doesn't use a certain plate. He just needs to get on with his story so it can be more interesting. Plus he uses really bad grammer that makes no sense at all.

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